hi :-)
tomorrow is dead line of 1st draft in advanced writting class.
this time topic is comparing something.
i choose that university n high school.
so folloing paragraph is my work, my grammar is poor i think, but i had hard task, pleas read it!
n, dont copy it X-(
finally, in addition, i will fix it tomorrow lesson!
University or High school
These days, a lot of high school students want to go on to university to study more, find their dreams and enjoy new life. There are many new university students to notice differences between university and high school. When they encounter something different, they must be upset and it is difficult to receive them. This essay will compare university and high school viewed in classes, scales and roles.
The first thing to compare is about class in university and high school. Both of them are school. It is the place to study some subjects. There are people who are called students and teachers. In the classes, teacher gives lessons for students. Sometimes people can find the sleeping student in both university and high school. They are similarity in basic points. However, there are some different points about classes too. Most universities have their own department, for example foreign language, economic, law, biology and other departments. They are so many types department students can learn. In addition, about time is also different. The average of class time of high school is 50 minutes. In contrast, most university is 90 minutes. It is clearly longer than high school, because it is necessary to learn peculiar knowledge at university.
Secondly, about scale can compare in university and high school. Both of them have large premise. There are main schoolhouse, school ground, gym and library. Sometimes there are school cafeterias in both school, and many students use it. On the other hand, the cost of university is higher than high school. The average cost of university is about 11,000,000 yen, and it is three times as expensive as high school, in short, school expenses of high school is about 3,000,000 yen.
Finally, people can sense the contrast about roles. Of course, there are similar points, for instance, in both school, students should came class on time. Students can not eat something during the lesson too. The basic types of roles are same, because if the roles could not work, students might act disorderly. It is also important to obey them. On the contrary, some roles are different. Many people think that universities are more freedom than high schools. About school uniform and hair color, university students allow to what clothes people wear and what color they dye their hair. High school students have to wear the school uniforms that are selected by schools, and they can not dye their hair, so a lot of students are black hair. In most cases, in high school, students are examined by teachers, whether their looks are official or not.
In conclusion, between university and high school, people can find same points and different points. They can also understand the feelings of the new university students. Through considering class, universities are more special and particular than high school. About cost, universities demand more expensive school expense. Universities are free of clothes and hair color, but basic rules are same at both school.
